Hey everyone, please give me feedback on Kalin. It will be a day or two until i get the next ideascrawl up. i have to translate it back into something legible to type up, as it’s not written in the usual alphabet. Also, the next few will all surround one character, but it’s an example [...]

“Kalin, honey, stay close to me. I don’t trust these merchants one whit,” Kalin’s young mother hissed. Or was she his mother at all? She looked to be barely twenty, too young to already have a five year old. She looked around, suddenly, exasperated, realizing that her son had wandered off already. She saw him [...]